Interesting,What are you trying to say here.the entire first line and last line is air. try something like this thisQuickly to deep sleepRelaxed by rushing waterThe sounds, the feel, calmed
i like this actuallyi think the last line shuld be changed to " Rushing past my feet"flows better page
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Interesting,
What are you trying to say here.
the entire first line and last line is air. try something like this this
Quickly to deep sleep
Relaxed by rushing water
The sounds, the feel, calmed
i like this actually
i think the last line shuld be changed to " Rushing past my feet"
flows better
page
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