Punctuation Exercise "IPOD"

I am so excited

My Brand new ipod has arrived

My ipod has many new features Music Videos Photos

My battery dies everyday I use it studying chilling and exercising

I tell everyone its so cool

My Visa Card

Swiping threw the pin pad

Losing money every second

Not keeping track of how much i use

Not keeping track of what i lose

I feel like just another card in my home

Something with no feelings

Just a regular card

Not being taken care of

War

Gun Shots, Bombings, Grenades

The sound of horror

Friends being killed every second

Eating the leftovers of dead people

Thinking if you will ever see you family again

Or worrying if you family is alive or not

Woken up at five in the morning every day to dig graves

And stuffing thousands of people in them

Thinking if one of thoes thousands of people will be you

Just Wondering and Wondering